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【诗歌】观察蚂蚁诗歌:队列(适合初中生)

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    观察蚂蚁诗歌:队列(适合初中生)
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    观察蚂蚁
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    2026-10-31
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文章题纲

  • 创作一首观察蚂蚁主题诗歌,角度侧重蚂蚁队伍的秩序与力量。面向初中生。必须包含队列、触角、大地三个意象。诗歌,20-30行,语言凝练,有含蓄的抒情。

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文章名称
字数
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一句走在大地上的话
708字
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我们是大地上的一条队列
688字
3
考试那天,一条队列从他眼前走过
625字
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一句走在大地上的话

放学路上,我在墙根看见它们列队走过。没有谁画过线,它们却走得比操场上任何一条队伍都直。一个接一个,嘴里都衔着一小片光,像衔着一个词,往句子的末尾走去。

没有人喊口令。触角碰一下,前面的慢下来;再碰一下,后面的绕了个弯。它们的话很少,少到大地听这场对话听了一亿年,从不厌烦。

我蹲下来,让影子落在队列旁边。大地很近,近得能听见草根在暗处挪动,近得能看见一粒沙子在夕阳里站成一座小小的碑。它们穿过我的影子,像穿过一片短暂的凉,没有停。

有一只停下来,回头用触角碰了碰后面的那只,两只换了位置。我不知道它们托付了什么。也许是前面的路太挤,也许是它们中有一只,想让另一只走到前面,先看一眼落日。

队列越过一条裂缝,翻过一根踩断的枯枝,绕过一个小水洼。大地把障碍一个一个摆给它们,它们把通路一条一条还给大地。没有人宣布开始,也没有人宣布结束,整个大地却像在替它们让路。

风来了,草俯下身。队列跟着俯身,又直起来。我想起自己在操场上排过的许多次队,总在交头接耳,总在动来动去。它们安静得像一句决定不跟任何人辩解的话。

一只蚂蚁离了队,在一块饼干屑前转了两圈,用触角把它整个量了一遍,然后转身归队,把消息递给后面。队列分出一小截,像一句话里长出的一个从句,把那块饼干屑围住,抬起,带走。它回到原来的位置,步子不快也不慢,好像刚才什么也没有发生。

我想一直蹲在那里,看它们把白天的光斑一片一片搬回家。风从墙根过去,大地平平地躺着,托着一条队列,也托着一个刚刚懂得步子踏实的人不必出声的少年。

光线暗下去,我看不见队列的头,也看不见尾。我只知道它们还在走,沿着大地的皮肤,把白天最后一片光搬进洞里。我站起来,拍了拍裤子上的土,带着一句说不出的话回家。

A Sentence Walking on the Earth

After the last bell, I saw them lined up at the corner of the wall. No line was drawn, yet they walked straighter than any column on the school playground. One after another, each carrying a small piece of light in its mouth, like a word walking toward the end of a sentence.

No one called the order. An antenna touched, and the front slowed down. Another touch, and the one behind turned aside. Their words are few, so few that the earth has listened to this conversation for a hundred million years without ever growing impatient.

I squatted down and let my shadow fall beside the column. The earth was close, close enough to hear the grass roots shifting in the dark, close enough to see a grain of sand standing like a small monument in the setting sun. They crossed my shadow as if crossing a brief coolness, without stopping.

One of them paused and touched the one behind with its antennae, and the two changed places. I do not know what they entrusted to each other. Maybe the road ahead was crowded; maybe one of them simply wanted the other to walk in front and see the sunset first.

The column crossed a crack, climbed over a broken twig, and went around a puddle. The earth placed one obstacle after another in their way, and they answered with one passage after another. No one fired a starting gun, no one called the end, yet the whole earth seemed to be making room for them.

The wind blew and the grass bent. The column bent with it and then stood up again. I thought of all the times I stood in line on the playground, whispering and shifting. They were quiet like a sentence that has decided not to argue with anyone.

One ant left the line, circled a crumb of biscuit twice, measured it all over with its antennae, then returned to the column and passed the news to the one behind. A short branch of the column grew out like a clause inside a sentence, surrounded the crumb, lifted it, and carried it away. The ant returned to its place at the same unhurried pace, as if nothing had happened.

I wanted to stay there forever and watch them carry the bright spots of daylight home one by one. The wind swept across the corner of the wall. The earth lay flat, holding a column, and holding a boy who had just begun to understand that steady steps make no sound.

When the light grew dim, I could no longer see the head or the end of the column. I only knew they were still walking, along the skin of the earth, carrying the last piece of daylight into their home. I stood up, brushed the dust from my pants, and went home carrying a sentence I could not say.

我们是大地上的一条队列

我们是大地上的一条队列。大地不知道我们走过它多少次,我们只知道太阳升起就出发,太阳落下,就把最后一片光搬回洞里。

触角是我们的话。两根触角碰一碰,前面的路就传了过来,连一滴雨的消息也一起传了过来。我们不喊,大地那么大,喊没有用。我们把身体贴紧大地,大地替我们驮着所有的消息。

打头的那只从不回头。它信任身后的同伴,像信任自己的六条腿。走在后面的也不问要去哪里,碰一碰前面那只的身体就够了。队列是我们共用的一副身体,从洞口一直拉到草地的尽头。

我们抬起一粒米,对我们来说它是一块黄色的巨石。一片虫翅落下来,对我们是一张帆。大地把这些东西摆在我们的路上,像在试探我们的肩膀还硬不硬,步子还齐不齐。

太阳升到头顶的时候,路面发烫,大地把热都收在自己身上,只留一点影子给路边的草。我们贴着影子走,影子挪一寸,我们跟一寸。走累了也不停,把步子放小一点,队列就短不了。谁摔倒了,后面的绕开他,把他驮的东西分着背走,没有一个东西掉在路中间。

有时一只巨脚落下来,大地晃了一下。队列散了,像一句被风吹散的话。可是很快,触角一根一根重新找到触角,那句话又被拼了回来,比原来更直。

下雨的时候,大地变软,我们往高处爬,带着卵,带着谷粒,带着整个冬天的记忆。雨点砸在我们的背上,我们把背互相抵住。队列没有断,队列把自己搭成了一座桥。

我们中有一些再也回不来。一只麻雀带走了一只,一滴蜜留住了一只。队列不停下来哀悼,我们把它驮的东西接过来,把它没走完的路走完。大地记得每一个倒在路上的小小的身体。

夜深了,最后一只进了洞。大地安静下来,可它知道,明天天亮我们还会列队。它一直在等我们,像母亲等孩子回家那样,轻轻地等。

We Are a Column Marching on the Earth

We are a column marching on the earth. The earth does not know how many times we have crossed it. We only know that we set out when the sun rises, and we carry the last piece of light back into our home when it sets.

Our antennae are our words. When two antennae touch, the road ahead is passed along, along with the news of a falling raindrop. We do not shout. The earth is so wide that shouting is useless. We press our bodies close to the ground, and the earth carries every message for us.

The one at the front never looks back. It trusts the one behind as much as it trusts its own six legs. The one behind asks no questions. A touch on the body in front is enough. The column is one shared body of ours, stretching from the mouth of the nest to the far end of the grass.

We lift a grain of rice, and to us it is a yellow boulder. A wing falls down, and to us it is a sail. The earth places these things in our path, as if testing whether our shoulders are still hard and our steps still even.

When the sun climbs overhead, the ground grows hot, and the earth keeps the heat inside itself, leaving only a little shade for the grass at the roadside. We walk along the shade, and when it moves an inch, we move an inch. When we are tired we do not stop; we only shorten our steps, and the column never grows shorter. If one of us falls, the ones behind step around and share the load on his back, so that nothing is ever left lying in the middle of the road.

Sometimes a giant foot comes down and the earth shakes. The column scatters like a sentence blown apart by the wind. Before long, the antennae find each other again, one by one, and the sentence is put back together, straighter than before.

When rain falls, the earth turns soft. We climb to higher ground, carrying our eggs, the grain, and the memory of a whole winter. The rain beats on our backs, and we press our backs against each other. The column does not break. The column builds itself into a bridge.

Some of us will not come back. A sparrow took one away, and a drop of honey held one fast. The column does not stop to mourn. We take over what it carried and finish the road it left half done. The earth remembers every small body that fell along the way.

When night is deep, the last of us enters the nest. The earth grows quiet, but it knows we will line up again at dawn. It has always been waiting for us, gently, the way a mother waits for her children to come home.


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